Richard Ivie-World War II

Comment by Dawn on April 2, 2008 at 10:56am

I uploaded version 2 of my video so please stop back by and post more comments.

Comment by Lori Holliday on April 2, 2008 at 11:58am

Your wonderful video is powerful, Dawn. The emotion grabs you and keeps you engaged in the story. Using the child's voice is a beautiful addition. Great job.

Comment by Brenda Chapman on April 2, 2008 at 12:06pm

I really liked the element of using the letter with a hand actually writing and I like that you had someone else read the letter. A very powerful story!

Comment by Jean Hendrickson on October 24, 2008 at 12:59pm

What beautiful work, Dawn!

Comment by Alicia Ivy on October 15, 2009 at 11:41am

I really like the letter sequencing. The voice change aw well as the zooming in and out was very effective.

Comment by Catherine Elizabeth Walling on October 15, 2009 at 12:50pm

Wow!! That is a powerful story.
Thank you so much for sharing something so personal to your family.

CW

Comment by Karisa Lester on October 15, 2009 at 2:07pm

I like using the different people's voices to tell the story and the variety of pictures.

Comment by Desire' Burke on October 15, 2009 at 2:08pm

Great video. I like the authentic photos of the artifacts. I like the use of differernt types of narration that was used.

Comment by Patti Warden on March 12, 2010 at 1:06pm

Thank You for sharing the story about your step father. It was very nice to hear some one else's story.

Comment by Vanessa Adams-Harris on March 15, 2010 at 11:30pm

Thank you Dawn, so much for everything. I had a wonderful experience. I'll load another as get more "time" this is such a great asset to share with the community and the children.

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